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Comment by James Ting on May 9, 2010 at 2:48am

You are welcome and good luck on your vocal tracks!

Comment by Wong Kin Wang, Danny on May 9, 2010 at 2:33am

aiya....佢d和音好複雜
i will try my best...thx yrs comment

Comment by James Ting on May 9, 2010 at 2:20am

Try to compare all those Britney tracks to your vocal track.

Comment by James Ting on May 9, 2010 at 2:19am

Comment by James Ting on May 9, 2010 at 2:18am

Comment by James Ting on May 9, 2010 at 2:12am

For Britney style vocal, You need a good mic w/ nice mic pre amp. And you need to double your vocal part during the whole song, autotune it. Use some compressor like LA2A, LA3A etc. to compress the vocal, etc. Also add some chorus efx on it, plus backing vocal harmony.

Her voice is not bad.

"sounds a bit rushy" means she sounds like very "Sum Kup" in her singing, not relax and under pressure.

Comment by Wong Kin Wang, Danny on May 9, 2010 at 1:58am

thx~
氣聲係rap part我有玩,但chorus part就無
但你話"sounds a bit rushy during",我唔明係點解?
vocal part我都覺得未最完美,可以的話我會再錄過,不過係屋企錄質素都係差d...
不過我就係點都做唔到好似Britney Spears果d歌咁厚既人聲,關個vocal本身的聲底事嗎?

Comment by James Ting on May 9, 2010 at 1:47am

I have listened to your song a few times, I think the vocal singer needs to add a breathy track in the pre-chorus part, then add 2 tracks (L+ R )doubling the chorus part.
Also, I think it will be good if she can sing it in a more relaxed way. Now she sounds a bit rushy during the whole song. I think your arrangement is not bad. And you need to cut the low end of your vocal track and compress it more in order to make the vocal sits in the whole mix.
Hope this will help.

Comment by Wong Kin Wang, Danny on May 9, 2010 at 12:48am

sorry james...
星期5前一晚做天光,起唔到身返學
剛剛upload左首歌上我page,人聲方面我都仲係係覺得差d,唔知點整好呢...
歌詞:

體溫 這刻已經快將爆燈
熱血再激增
毛髮手腳火般發滾

室溫 再加上一兩盞吊燈
前戲的擁吻
猶如炸藥點了藥引

叱吒轉身
抱緊你身貼身來盡情地留下我指紋

相當甘心
展開我的進攻來換成愛人熱吻
高等貴賓不可靠近


#來來回回迷人霄魂
怎麼分煩人傻人蠢人
你與我在舞池內下滲
錯與對是無需要再分

來來回回型人高人
怎麼分情人良朋好人
你與我換個面具來下個
舞內舞外愛的替身
到下個人 再親吻#


犧牲 每一晚跟某君某君
步履企不穩
情和愛恨不懂再分

狠心 每一晚得我一個人
白銀與真金
如同廢物不要步近

叱吒轉身
抱緊我身貼身來盡情地留下你指紋

很不甘心
展開你的進攻來強行奪人熱吻

低等角色不准靠近

It's time for show, make it perfectly
Yeah! Com'on, boy! You can make it
This song is gonna be encored
There's no way to ask for more

OK! Show me how you rock and I dominate the clock
You say 'I'm very hot'
And I try hard but there's no way to run
Can you stop for a moment and wait for the sun?


repeat #

Comment by kEnNeTh Pang Ying Lun on March 5, 2010 at 2:50am

demo-rearrange07.mp3

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